如何回复英文论文编辑部的修改意见

第一篇：如何回复英文论文编辑部的修改意见

望对大家有帮助 1.Dear Prof.XXXX，Thank you very much for your letter and the comments from the referees about our paper submitted to XXXX(MS Number XXXX).We have checked the manuscript and revised it according to the comments.We submit here the revised manuscript as well as a list of changes.If you have any question about this paper, please don’t hesitate to let me know.Sincerely yours，Dr.XXXX

Response to Reviewer 1: Thanks for your comments on our paper.We have revised our paper according to your comments: 1.XXXXXXX 2.XXXXXXX

2.Dear Professor ***，Re: An *** Rotating Rigid-flexible Coupled System(No.: JSV-D-06-***)

by ***

Many thanks for your email of 24 Jun 2006, regarding the revision and advice of the above paper in JSV.Overall the comments have been fair, encouraging and constructive.We have learned much from it.After carefully studying the reviewer’ comments and your advice, we have made corresponding changes to the paper.Our response of the comments is enclosed.If you need any other information, please contact me immediately by email.My email account is ***, and Tel.is ***, and Fax is +***.Yours sincerely, Detailed response to reviewer’s comments and Asian Editor’s advice

Overall the comments have been fair, encouraging and constructive.We have learned much from it.Although the reviewer’s comments are generally positive, we have carefully proofread the manuscript and edit it as following.(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)

Besides the above changes, we have corrected some expression errors.Thank you very much for the excellent and professional revision of our manuscript.3.The manuscript is revised submission(×××－××××)with new line and page numbers in the text, some grammar and spelling errors had also been corrected.Furthermore, the relevant regulations had been made in the original manuscript according to the comments of reviewers, and the major revised portions were marked in red bold.We also responded point by point to each reviewer comments as listed below, along with a clear indication of the location of the revision.Hope these will make it more acceptable for

publication.List

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1).........2).........3).........Response to Reviewer XX

We very much appreciate the careful reading of our manuscript and valuable suggestions of the reviewer.We have carefully considered the comments and have revised the manuscript accordingly.The comments can be summarized as follows:

1)XX 2)XX

Detailed responses 1)XX 2)XX 4.Dear editor XX

We have received the comments on our manuscript entitled “XX” by XX.According to the comments of the reviewers, we have revised our manuscript.The revised manuscript and the detailed responses to the comments of the one reviewer are attached.Sincerely yours, XX

5.Response to Reviewer A

Reviewer A very kindly contacted me directly, and revealed

himself to be Professor Dr.Hans-Georg Geissler of the University of Leipzig.I wrote him a general response to both reviews in January 2000, followed by these responses to specific points, both his own, and those of the other reviewer.Response to Specific Points

What follows is a brief and cursory discussion of the various issues raised by yourself and the other reviewer.If you should revise your judgment of the validity of the theory, these points will be addressed at greater length in a new version of the paper that I would resubmit to Psychological Review.Response to Specific Points-Reviewer A:

In part(1)of your critique the major complaint is that no theory is presented, which was discussed above.You continue “Regrettably, not much attention is drawn to specific differences between the chosen examples that would be necessary to pinpoint specificities of perception more precisely”, and “if perceptual systems, as suggested, hler(Kindeed act on the basis of HR, there must be many more specific constraints involved to ensure special `veridicality' properties of the perceptual outcome”, and “the difficult analytic problems of concrete modeling of perception are not even touched”.The model as presented is not a model of vision or audition or any other particular modality, but is a general model to confront the alternative neural receptive field paradigm, although examples from visual perception are used to exemplify the principles discussed.The more specific visual model was submitted elsewhere, in the Orientational Harmonic model, where I showed how harmonic resonance accounts for specific visual illusory effects.As discussed above, the attempt here is to propose a general principle of neurocomputation, rather than a specific

model of visual, auditory, or any other specific sensory modality.Again, what I am proposing is a paradigm rather than a theory, i.e.an alternative principle of neurocomputation with specific and unique properties, as an alternative to the neuron doctrine paradigm of the spatial receptive field.If this paper is eventually accepted for publication, then I will resubmit my papers on visual illusory phenomena, referring to this paper to justify the use of the unconventional harmonic resonance mechanism.In part(2)(a)of your critique you say “it is not clarified whether the postulated properties of Gestalts actually follow from this definition or partly derive from additional constraints.” and “I doubt that any of the reviewed examples for HR can treat just the case of hler:(1961, p.7)”Human experience in the phenomenological sense cannot yet be treated with our most reliable methods;and when dealing with it, we may be forced to form new concepts which at first, will often be a bit vague.“

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`emergence'.For this a hierarchy relation is needed.” The principle of emergence in Gestalt theory is a very difficult concept to express in unambiguous terms, and the dog picture was presented to illustrate this rather elusive concept with a concrete example.I do not suggest that HR as proposed in this paper can address the dog picture as such, since this is specifically a visual problem, and the HR model as presented is not a visual model.Rather, I propose that the feature detection paradigm cannot in principle handle this kind of ambiguity, because the local features do not individually contain the information

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insignificant edges.The solution of the HR approach to visual ambiguity is explained in the paper in the section on

“Recognition by Reification”(p.15-17)in which I propose that recognition is not simply a matter of the identification of features in the input, i.e.by the “lighting up” of a higher level feature node, but it involves a simultaneous abstraction and reification, in which the higher level feature node reifies its particular pattern back at the input level, modulated by the exact pattern of the input.I appeal to the reader to see the reified form of the dog as perceived edges and surfaces that are not present in the input stimulus, as evidence for this reification in perception, which appears at the same time that the recognition occurs.The remarkable property of this reification is that the dog appears not as an image of a canonical, or prototypical dog, but as a dog percept that is warped to the exact posture and configuration allowed by the input, as observed in the subjective experience of the dog picture.This explanation is subject to your criticism in your general comments, that “the author demonstrates more insight than explicitly stated in assumptions and drawn conclusions”.I can only say that, in Kuhn's words, sometimes it is only personal and inarticulate aesthetic considerations that can be used to make the case.In the words of Wolfgang K?hler:(1961, p.7)

“Human experience in the phenomenological sense cannot yet be treated with our most reliable methods;and when dealing with it, we may be forced to form new concepts which at first, will often be a bit vague.” Wolfgang K?hler(K?hler 1923 p.64)

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hyptotheses, which cannot be verified by direct observation at the time when they are formed nor for a long time thereafter.Of such a kind were Ampere's theory of magnetism, the kinetic theory of gases, the electronic theory, the hypothesis of atomic

disintegration in the theory of radioactivity.Some of these assumptions have since been verified by direct observation, or have at least come close to such direct verification;others are still far removed from it.But physics and chemistry would have been condemned to a permanent embryonic state had they abstained from such hypotheses;their development seems rather like a continuous effort steadily to shorten the rest of the way to the verification of hypotheses which survive this process”

In section(2)(b)of your critique you complain that “there is no serious discussion of possible alternatives”, and you mention Neo-Gibsonian approaches, PDP, Grossberg's ART model and Pribram's holographic theory.In the next version of the paper this omission will be corrected, approximately as follows.Gibson's use of the term resonance is really a metaphorical device, since Gibson offers no mechanisms or analogies of perceptual processes, but merely suggests that there is a two-way flow of information(resonance)between

behavior

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environment.This is really merely a metaphor, rather than a model.The PDP approach does address the issue of emergence, but since the basic computational unit of the neural network model is a hard-wired receptive field, this theory suffers all the limitations of a template theory.The same holds for Grossberg's “Adaptive Resonance Theory”, which also uses the word resonance metaphorically to suggest a bottom-up top-down matching, but in Grossberg's model that matching is actually performed by receptive fields, or spatial templates.The ART model demonstrates the limitations of this approach.For the only way that a higher-level detector, or “F2 node”, can exhibit generalization to different input patterns, is for it to have synaptic weights to all of the patterns to which it responds.In essence, the

pattern of synaptic weights is a superposition or blurring together of all of the possible input patterns to which the F2 node should respond.In top-down priming mode therefore that F2 node would “print” that same blurred pattern back at the lower “F1 node” level, activating all of the possible patterns to which that F2 node is tuned to respond.For example if an ART model were trained to respond to an “X”-shaped feature presented at all possible orientations, top-down priming of this node after training would “print” a pattern of all those X-shaped features at all orientations superimposed, which is simply an amorphous blob.In fact, that same node would respond even better to a blob feature than to any single X feature.In the presence of a partial or ambiguous X-like pattern presented at a particular orientation, the ART model could not complete that pattern specific to its orientation.The HR model on the other hand offers a different and unique principle of representation, in which top-down activation of the higher level node can complete a partial or ambiguous input pattern in the specific orientation at which it appears, but that same priming would complete the pattern differently if it appeared in a different orientation.This generalization in recognition, but specification in completion, is a property that is unique to the harmonic resonance representation.Kuhn observes that the old paradigm can always be reformulated to account for any particular phenomenon addressed by the new paradigm, just as the Ptolomaic earth-centered cosmology could account for the motions of the planets to arbitrary precision, given enough nested cycles and epicycles of the crystal spheres.Similarly, a conventional neural network model can always be contrived to exhibit the same functional behavior of generalized recognition but specific completion

described above, but only by postulating an implausible arrangement of spatial receptive fields.In this case that would require specific X-feature templates applied to the input at every possible orientation, any one of which can stimulate a single rotation-invariant X-feature node, to account for bottom-up rotation invariance in recognition.However in order to also account for top-down completion specific to orientation, top-down activation of the higher-level invariant node would have to feed back down to a set of top-down projection nodes, each of which is equipped with an X-shaped projective template at a particular orientation, able to project a complete X-shaped pattern on the input field.But the top-down completion must select only the specific orientation that best matches the pattern present in the input, and complete the pattern only at that best matching orientation.This system therefore requires two complete sets of X-feature receptive fields or templates, one set for bottom-up recognition and the other set for top-down completion, each set containing X-feature templates at every possible orientation, and similar sets of receptive fields would be required for the recognition of other shaped patterns such as “T” and “V” features.This represents a “brute force” approach to achieving invariance, which although perhaps marginally plausible in this specific example, is completely implausible as a general principle of operation of neurocomputation, given the fact that invariance appears to be so fundamental a property of human and animal perception.However, as Kuhn also observes, a factor such as neural plausibility is itself a “personal and inarticulate aesthetic consideration” that cannot be determined unambiguously by the evaluative procedures characteristic of normal science.With regard to Pribram's Holographic theory, the

concept of a hologram is closely related to a standing wave model, since it too works by interference of waveforms.The difference is that the hologram is “frozen in time” like a photograph, and therefore does not exhibit the tolerance to elastic deformation of the input, as does the standing wave model.Neither does the hologram exhibit rotation invariance as does the standing wave in a circular-symmetric system.However holograms can in principle be constructed of dynamic standing waves, as Pribram himself suggests, and this concept then becomes a harmonic resonance theory.The present proposal is therefore closely related to Pribram's approach, which will be discussed in the next version of the paper.The discussion of alternative models was indeed a significant omission in the version of the paper you reviewed, the next version will include such a discussion, which in turn will help to clarify the operational principles of the HR theory, and distinguish it from alternative approaches.In section(3)of your critique you propose that “notions like the receptive field concept are approximate descriptions of facts”, and you propose a dualistic approach involving two forms of representations in the brain which are of different and complementary nature.While I do not dispute the anatomical facts of the shapes of neuron and the function of synapses, it has never been demonstrated that a neuron actually operates as a spatial template, that theory arose as an explanation for the neurophysiological response of “feature detector” cells in the cortex.However the noisy stochastic nature of the neural response, and its very broad tuning function seem to argue against this view.My own hunch is that the feature detector behavior is itself a standing wave phenomenon, which is consistent with the fact that the response function of V1

cortical neurons resembles a Gabor function, which is itself a wavelet.However this issue is orthogonal to my main point, which is that whether or not some neurons behave as spatial templates, the limitations of a template theory suggest that the Gestalt properties of perception(emergence, invariance, reification, multistability)cannot be accounted for in that manner, and that some other significant principle of computation must be invoked to account for the Gestalt properties of perception.In section(4)you complain that there is no discussion of the limitations in the scope of HR.For example merely to reflect outside reality does not contribute to the problem of conscious awareness of these objects.However this issue is not unique to HR, it is a general philosophical issue that applies just as well to the alternative Neuron Doctrine model.But the Neuron doctrine itself cannot even plausibly account for the reflection of outside reality in an internal representation, due to the problems of emergence, reification, and invariance, which is why the Neuron Doctrine suggests a more abstracted concept of visual representation, in which the visual experience is encoded in a far more abstracted and abbreviated form.Therefore although HR does not solve the “problem of consciousness” completely, it is one step closer to a solution than the alternative.The philosophical issue of consciousness however is beyond the scope of this paper, which is a theory of neural representation, rather than a philosophical paper.I enclose a copy of my book, “The World In Your Head”, which addresses these philosophical issues more extensively.Professor Geissler's Response

Professor Geissler kindly responded to my letter in April 2000 to say that he agreed with nearly everything I had said.He then gave me advice about the presentation of the idea.He

recommended that I begin by describing the Neuron Doctrine in detail, and then point out the limitations of the idea before presenting the Harmonic Resonance theory as an alternative.I re-wrote the paper following Geissler's advice, and I included some ideas from the above letter in the new version of the paper.However it was too late to resubmit it to Psychological Review since the editor who was handling the paper was leaving.Furthermore, I am becoming convinced that the proper medium for presenting radically new and different theories is the open peer review format of the Behavioral and Brain Sciences journal, which is where I submitted the revised version of this paper.6.Dear Dr.S.Heller，Attached please the revised manuscript “ A Group-Decision Approach for Evaluating Educational Web Sites” submitted to computers & Education for possible publication.A file containing the revision summary is also attached.Your

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Response to Reviewers and Editor Paper#: SMCC-03-06-0056 Title: On the Development of a Computer-Assisted Testing System with Genetic Test Sheet-Generating Approach

[Reviewer 1 Comments]: ____ The paper should be shortened.[Response to Reviewer 1]: The paper has been shortened to 24 pages by removing some redundant descriptions of genetic models and algorithms;moreover, Sections 3 and 4 have been re-written to condense the entire paper.[Reviewer 2 Comments]: No innovative contribution was found both in the theory of genetic algorithms and in the

application of them.[Response to Reviewer 2]:(1)_We have re-written the abstract and Sections 1 and 2 to explain the importance about the construction of a good test sheet.The major contribution of this paper is not in its technical part.Instead, we tried to cope with an important problem arising from real educational applications.Such a problem is known to be critical and has not been efficiently and effectively solved before.(2)_Since the innovative contribution of this paper might not be significant, we have re-written the paper as a technical correspondence based on the editor's suggestion.[Reviewer 3 Comments]: Make the definitions, formulas, and other descriptions clearer and more precise, so that the revised paper will be improved in its readability and correctness.[Response to Reviewer 3]: Te mixed integer models and the genetic algorithms in Sections 3 and 4 have been re-written to make the definitions, formulas, and other descriptions clearer and more precise(please refer to Pages 6-17).Moreover, a colleague who is an English expert has carefully checked the paper to correct potential grammatical errors. 第二篇：论文修改意见

论文修改意见该怎么写呢？下面小编整理了论文修改意见，欢迎大家阅读学习！

论文修改意见 冉金花论文修改意见：

1、论文格式不对，目录放在摘要前； 2、没有参考文献，谢辞。 3、论文的字体、字号不符合要求。 4、摘要及关键词重新写。 5、论文第二章详细写。 6、加子课题题目。

宋党伟论文修改意见： 1、目录让word自动生成；

2、文章第二部分面临的主要问题较浅，请根据你的分析找出深层的问题、主要问题。

3、然后第三章主要是对策分析，针对上述问题提出解决对策。 4、论文字体、字号不对。 5、最后一部分差谢辞。 6、关键词3~5个。 陈云论文修改意见：

1、论文格式不对，没有摘要，参考文献，谢辞。 2、写上子题目。

3、文章在第二章后加一章写出解决第三方物流问题的解决措施。 4、请提出自己的观点。 刘志波论文修改意见： 1、目录应放在最前面。

2、第三章要详细写，并且要有小标题。 3、第四章写网络广告的发展趋势 4、第五章总结 5、可去掉英文摘要 马锐锋论文修改意见：

1、将论文题目改为我国移动电子商务的现状与对策，然后第二章要有小标题并详细写；

2、注意存在的问题及提出的对策要联系实际，具有实际操作的意义；

3、总结前对移动电子商务作展望 4、谢辞不是谢词

5、开题报告中加上参考文献

6、任务书的格式重新排版，()学生应完成的任务写本论文应达到的目标

7、请修改完后将其打印出来，交过来。

付元论文修改意见：

1、只能打开论文及任务书，任务书的题目不对，请改正，然后将打印稿交过来；

论文修改意见：逻辑结构混乱，第一部分请从电子商务的安全问题着手引出安全问题，然后介绍防火墙目前的技术及解决措施、存在的问题，并由此提出自己的想法、观点，最后对防火墙技术在电子商务中的应用作展望，不是对电子商务作展望，请认真修改。不要东拼西凑

郑赛论文修改意见：

1、论文的格式每章应从新的页面开始； 2、论文至少要有三章，每章要有小标题；

3、请按照提出问题，分析问题，解决问题的思路进行撰写，而不是抄袭；

4、开题报告，请加上参考文献；

5、任务书请仔细检查，有错，学生应完成的任务一栏填写本论文要在达到的目标。 第三篇：论文修改意见

根据老师的建议，现作出如下修改：

1、对摘要进行调整，将之前与论文不对应的部分删去，重点突出宏观调控政策及其对房地产价格的影响。

2、将政策具体化，去粗取精，选取转折年份的宏观调控政策并将其罗列。

3、对长沙市的具体数据进行取舍，通过房地产开发投资等具体指标变化与房价相联系。

4、对供求关系如何影响房价部分调整，将文字转化为图表形式，更加直观。

5、加入相关政策建议。

6、对框架重新整合，将之前宏观调控中三大政策分别影响房价，修改为三大政策齐头并进，共同影响，这样更有说服力。

7、将房价剥离出来，通过供求关系变化来影响房价。

8、对文字进行精简，去除不必要的枝节，缩减篇幅。

9、增加参考文献数量，更多的参考期刊内容，对参考文献时间更新。

10、由于写作局限，希望老师再指导一下，之后做的更细致更好。 第四篇：论文的修改意见

硕士论文的修改意见

一、摘要部分和综述部分建议集中缩减，要有分析

将文章中主要观点、主要方法、主要理论论述、主要创新部分加以介绍和分析。

在研究方法这段论述中，要分清楚，文化产业不是一个自古以来就有的概念，你的论述中含有这样的意思，一定要改过来。所谓“表现不明显”非常错误。那时根本没有文化产业，何来表现不明显？

综述不是简单地把别人的意见和看法介绍出来，而是要加以整理分析。

二、文章写得过“大”，要调整，建议文章整个框架推倒重来 第一章概述比重严重失调，要精炼缩减

调查章节很翔实，但不足在于跟你后面要讲到的问题没关系。调查资料的引用和分析一定要和文化产业开发创意相关联。建议借鉴关于旅游资源的理论分析，从中找到与山江苗寨相关联，对旅游能产生价值影响的部分来加以分析论证。

绪论部分要讲述问题由来。为什么研究山江苗寨？重要动机是什么？当下关于山江苗寨，或者关于传统民族村落文化产业研究有什么价值和问题。对这些问题，你将提出什么。这是你的问题由来。

第一部分要简单概述山江苗寨资源，分析这些资源的价值（将你的第一章和第二章合并）。

第二部分是你的重点。主要把山江苗寨作为传统村落进行文化产业开发的主要成就加以梳理、归纳，总结，提出有复制推广意义的规律性的东西。这部分你还要加强学习，要大量阅读关于传统村落旅游的价值分析文章，经验分析文章，以及相关理论。在此基础上，认真思考，写出有独创意义的东西出来。

第三部分要对山江苗寨文产不足部分进行分析，结合当下国家大力发展乡村游的精神，针对性的提出我国乡村游的对策性建议。原来第三部分中关于动力分析这章问题也很大。基本上没讲清楚动力问题。资源不是动力、经济仅仅只是宏观动力，不能成为山江苗寨的具体动力。所谓动力，就是山江苗寨为什么要搞文化产业，造成这种态势的驱动力是什么，有哪些？

产业模式这一节基本没有内容，十分空洞。发展战略也没有实质性内容。特别是你把战略定位理解成整合资源是错误的，修改。

三、建议写作方向思考

1、苗族本身就具有歌舞表达的天性，这是构成传达激情的要素之一；

2、苗族还具有很多传统工艺美术和其他技艺，这些技艺也同样具有传播热情。

3、山江不仅是一个苗族村落，更重要的这里还是苗族集镇，是经济交易的地方。经济要素发展比较好，这种经济思维促使把文化转化成生产力的热情和想法。

4、苗族文化精英和能人对文化产业的推动力。此外还有其他一些因素构成动力。 第五篇：英文回复邀请函

英文回复邀请函范文

邀请函的回复怎么回?而在英语中又怎么回复，才能更显礼仪。下面是小编为大家整理的英文回复邀请函范文，希望对大家有帮助。

英文回复邀请函范文篇一

Inviting a friend to informal luncheon Dear :

Will you come to luncheon on , at ?

My niece is visiting us and I think you will enjoy meeting her.She is a charming, very pretty girl and very good company!will be here, and perhaps we can after luncheon.Do say youll come!

Affectionately yours，Li Ming 英文回复邀请函范文篇二

Inviting friends to supper with the strangers Dear :

I know you are interested in , so Im sure youll be interested in!They are coming here

to supper , and wed like you and to come, too.are that very charming couple we met in last summer.They have a wonderful collection of;and I understand that Mr.Lin Dun is quite an authority on.Im sure you and Walter will thoroughly enjoy and evening in their company.Were planning supper at six;that will give us a nice long evening to talk.If I dont hear from you before then, Ill be expecting you on the!

Affectionately yours，Li Ming 英文回复邀请函范文篇三 An

invitation for a house and weekend party Dear :

I hope havent any plan for the weekend of as wed like you to spend it with us at.Its simply beautiful here now, with everything in bloom!

I think we can promise some good fishing this year.The fish are biting better than ever!So bring your fishing clothes;and be s

ure to bring your tennis things, too, because are coming and Im sure youll want to get out on the courts with them.Theres a very good train;Ive marked it in red on the timetable.It gets you here about which is just in time for dinner.You can get a late train back , or theres an early express that usually takes on.We hope nothing will prevent you from coming, as were looking forward to your visit and I know are looking

forward to seeing you again, too.Be sure to let us know what train you are taking so that can meet you at the station.Affectionately yours,